英语叙事作文练习和范文

范文1:英语叙事作文练习和范文

看图作文写作指导一、高考看图作文技巧:1.仔细审题:包括文体,人称,时态.//理解到位:整体把握一组图的连贯性理解及题目要求。

2.归纳要点:保证文章内容的完整.//基础到位:用简单句写出每幅图的主题句。

3.扩展成句:注意英语表达的习惯,根据提纲扩展句子.//细节到位:注意每幅图的次要内容(时间,地点,方式,原因等)

4.连句成篇:利用一些表示转折,因果,选择等关系的关联词和过渡句,把句子连接起来.//表达到位:按情节发展先后,承上启下整理成文。5.全面检查:格式文体要点语法字数等.//检查到位:对照各幅图,检查全文定稿。

二、看图作文的体裁:记叙文:要抓住记叙文的六要素:when, where, who, what, why, how.即五个“W”和一个“H”。要注意人物与空间的关系,画面与画面的关系,要点与发挥的关系。三、常用句型:

1. One day / the other day / a couple of days ago / while he was…,he..

2. It was snowing /raining heavily on Monday /Sunday morning …when …3. Seeing this, I ran over to him as soon as possible.4. Without hesitation, I decided to give him a hand.5. It turned out that he was a thief.6. Tired as we were, we were very delighted because we made contributions to environmental protection.

7. The following day, we visited a lot of attractions in London.8. I’ll forget the day when we visited on the farm.四.范例 A.假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

1注意:词数不少于60.提示词:游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin Sample: Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy. B.假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树。请根据一下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意:字数不少于60。提示词:郊区 suburbs

Sample: Green Action in Our Class April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.(背景) In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action.(过程)

Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.(感受)

2C.下面4幅图片描述的是是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片把提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。

注意:字数不少于60。参考词汇:货摊 stand(n);抢夺 snatch(v);逮捕 arrest(v) One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park.

参考范文:

One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. Hearing the shouting“stop him”, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby and as the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher’s legs, so the young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. At last, the woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness w.w.w.k.s.5.u.c.o.m

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范文2:中考英语写作训练1:写人记叙文

写记叙文体裁特点

记叙文就是记载、叙述我们在生活中看到、听到、经历过、接触过的一些人物和事件的文章。记叙人物和事件,必须掌握四个要素,即时间、地点、人物、事件(起因,发展,结果)。技巧点拨

写人的记叙文,是通过对人物思想性格的刻画来表现中心思想,也就是说写人要写“魂”。写人时,首先要确定文章的中心,然后再选择典型时间来写。一般要注意下面四点:1.角度要新。要尽量尝试从新的角度去表现人物。2.角度小。角度选择得小一些,小中见大,效果更好。

3.角度要集中。应设法找到特定的角度,便于突出人物的特点。

4.角度要典型。高明的画家总是在“一鳞一爪”的描绘中,再现“龙”的风采。写人的作文也是如此,作者要通过对人物的某角度的典型描写,来反映人物的全貌。

写作指南

刘伟,无臂钢琴演奏者。他在10岁时在一次意外中失去双臂,但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴的梦想。经过用脚刻苦训练钢琴,他最终在“中国达人秀”(China’s Got Talent)的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英文短文。要求:

1.简要描述刘伟的经历;

2.谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示;

3.词数80个左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very special experience

思路呈现

“四”个确定(1)

1.文章体裁:写人的记叙文2.主体时态:一般过去时3.中心人称:第三人称4.写作要点:(1)刘伟的经历:lost his arm;never give up his dream;practice with his feet;realized his dream(2)启示:be brave;belive our dream will come true by working hard;we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.

(2)拟定提纲

人物简介 an armless piano player (3)连句成文

Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very special experience.He lost his arms in an accident when he was 10,but he didn’t give up his dream of being a pianist.He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in “China’s Got Talent”.

As a student,I’ve learnt a lot from his story.We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life,but we should believe that our dreams will come true by working hard.No matter how hard life is ,we won’t fail unless we give up our hope.

介绍过去经历实现梦想

When he was ten,he…..but,,, he realized his dream in ….

启示 When we meet difficulties,we should …..

(1)思路训练

假设你喜欢的老师是Mr.Wang 或者Ms.Wang,请根据下面的提示,以My Favorite Teacher为题目,用英语写一篇短文。要求:

1.必须包括(1)desciption;(2)friendship;(3)the best quality三个方面的内容,括号内的提示可以任意选择也可以适当发挥;

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名

3.词数80~100个(文章题目和开头已经给出,不计入总词数)

My favorite teacher is Ms.Wang [1]“四”个确定

1.文章体裁:2.主体时态:3.中心人物:4.写作要点:按要求描写老师的外貌,品质及与你们的友谊即:

(1)外貌:(2)友情:(3)品质:[2]拟定提纲

1.开篇点题:2.描写外貌:3.描写友谊:4.描写品质:5.总结全文:[3]连句成文

思路训练答案

[1]1.写人的记叙文;2.一般现在时;3.第三人称;4.(1)age,look,clothes,etc.;(2)her class,how to help you,etc.;(3)kind,warm-hearted,strict,helpful,etc.

[2]1.My favorite teacher isShe teaches us;2.She is years old.She is (tall/short)with hair.She often wears;3.Her class is When I,she always;4.She is warm-hearted.She is;5.I think she isI should [3] My Favorite Teacher My favorite teacher is Ms.Wang .She teaches us English.She is a 36-year-old woman.And she is tall and has long straight hair.And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. We all like listening to her because her classes are very interesting an creative.She is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble,she always tries her best to help us .we (2)

提升训练

请用英语写一篇短文,介绍一位你的好朋友Li Lei。要点如下:1.他乐于助人,性格外向,兴趣广泛;2.他成绩优秀,经常在学习上帮助我;3.我准备送他一个以表达感谢;4.我对他的祝福和希望;注意:

1.词数80~100个,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

2.短文需包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。

We are graduating from school soon.I will miss to many good friends.especially my best friendLi Lei.

提升训练范文

We are graducating from school soon.I will miss so many good friends.especially my best friendsLi Lei. Li Lei is a top student .He is outgoing and hard-working.He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others.We get on very well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems .I’m so proud of him .

I care so much about him that I want to do something meaningful for him .Before leaving school ,I’ll send him a card that I make myself with my best wishes .I hope he will have a bright future and our friendship will last forever.

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范文3:高考英语概要写作指导及训练记叙文

高考英语概要写作指导及训练一、写作指导

摘要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述。它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题。写摘要主要包括三个步骤:(1)阅读;(2)写作;(3)修改成文。第一步:阅读

A.认真阅读给定的原文材料。如果一遍不能理解,就多读两遍。阅读次数越多,你对原文的理解就越深刻。

B.给摘要起一个标题。用那些能概括文章主题思想的单词、短语或短句子作为标题。也可以采用文中的主题句作为标题。主题句往往出现在文章的开头或结尾。一个好标题有助于确定文章的中心思想。

C.现在,就该决定原文中哪些部分重要,哪些部分次重要了。对重要部分的主要观点进行概括。

D.简要地记下主要观点主题、标题、细节等你认为对概括摘要重要的东西。第二步:动手写作

A.摘要应尽量用自己的话完成。不要直接引用原文的句子。

B.应该遵循原文的逻辑顺序。这样你就不必重新组织观点、事实。

C.摘要必须全面、清晰地表明原文所载的信息,以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意。

D.写摘要时可以采用下列几种小技巧:1)删除细节。只保留主要观点。2)选择一至两个例子。原文中可能包括5个或更多的例子,你只需从中筛选一至二个例子。3)把长段的描述变成短小、简单的句子。如果材料中描述某人或某事用了十个句子,那么你只要把它们变成一两句即可。

4)避免重复。在原文中,为了强调某个主题,可能会重复论证说明。但是这在摘要中是不能使用的。应该删除那些突出强调的重述句。5)压缩长的句子。如下列两例:

“His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lion-like.”可以概括为:”He was very brave in battle.”

“He was hard up for money and was being pressed by his creditor.”可以概括为:“He was in financial difficulties.”

6)你还可以使用词组代替整句或者从句。请看下面的例子:

“Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, Lushan Mountain, and Mount Huang, were visited by only a few people in the past. Today, better wages, holidays with pay, new hotels on these mountains, and better train and bus services, have brought them within reach of many who never thought of visiting them ten years ago.”可以概括为:”Beautiful mountains like Mount Tai, once visited by only a few people, are today accessible to many, thanks to better wages, paid holidays, new hotels and better transportation services.”

7)使用概括性的名词代替具体的词,比如:

“She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation.”可以概括为:”She brought home a lot of books to read during the vocation.”8)使用最短的连接词。比如,可以使用but, then, thus, yet, though,不能使用at the same time,1

in the first place, because of these, on the other hand等较长的连接词。通常,使用分号就能够达成使用连接词的效果。

9)文章中的第一人称说的话通常在摘要中转换成第三人称,从而把大段的对白简化,比如: Kate looked at Paul disapprovingly: You use much too much salt on your food, Paul it’s not good for you!” Paul put down his knife and frowned:”Why on earth not! If you didn’t have salt on your food it would taste awful… like eating cardboard or sand… just imagine bread without salt in it, or potatoes or pasta cooked without salt!” Kate was patient. She didn’t want to quarrel with Paul. She wanted to persuade him. She said firmly:”But too much salt is bad for you. It cause high blood pressure and latter on, heart-attacks. It also disguises the taste of food, the real tastes which are much more subtle than salt, and which we have lost the sensitivity to appreciate any more.”

可以用第三人称概括为:

Kate suggested to Paul that he should eat less salt. She thought that eating too much salt would do hard to Paul’s health and that it could reduce the real tastes of food. But Paul disagreed. He said that food without salt would be tasteless.第三步:修改成文

草稿拟好以后,对它进行修改。首先,与原文比较看是否把所有重要的观点都概括了,摘要中的观点是否与原文中的完全一致。其次,如果摘要中出现了不必要的词汇、短语或长句子,删除它们。第三,检查拼写、语法和标点符号的错误。最后,保持语言简单明了。经过上述步骤和方法,一篇摘要就可以完成了。

二、记叙文概要写作

要写好记叙文的概要,先要找到以下两个问题的答案:1.谁做什么了?2.结果如何?如果是夹叙夹议,还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。

1.A college student selling Chinese pancake in New York has become Internet hit recently. The pancake stall is owned by a Chinese student surnamed Li, who was born in 1990s. She started to run the pancake stall on Oct.26 this year. Every day she sells nearly 200 pancakes and gets 1,500 US dollars in return.Every day she sells nearly 200 pancakes and gets 1,500 US dollars in return.

Starting up the business is not an easy thing. Li receives parking tickets every day from New York Traffic Department."Their truck is lovely and the food is delicious. Veggie pancake is sold at 7 dollars each. And you need to pay 2.5 dollars for an extra sausage or ham," said Xu, who is a college student of the New York University. Li was born and raised in Beijing. She went to the United States for college. She majored in business and minored in art history. After graduation, she did not like working in the office and came up with the idea of starting up her own business."I am familiar with Chinese pancake because I grew up in Beijing. I barely saw Chinese pancake in New York so I thought it may have market," Li said.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2. When her five daughters were young, Helene An always told them that there was strength in unity (团结). To show this, she held up one chopstick, representing oneperson. Then she easily broke it into two pieces. Next, she tied several chopsticks together, representing a family. She showed the girls it was hard to break the tied chopsticks. This lesson about family unity stayed with the daughters as they grew up.Helene An and her family own a large restaurant business in California. However, when Helene and her husband Danny left their home in Vietnam in 1975, they didn't have much money. They moved their family to San Francisco. There they joined Danny's mother, Diana, who owned a small Italian sandwich shop. Soon afterwards, Helene and Diana changed the sandwich shop into a small Vietnamese restaurant. The five daughters helped in the restaurant when they were young. However, Helene did not want her daughters to always work in the family business because she thought it was too hard. Eventually the girls all graduated from college and went away to work for themselves, but one by one, the daughters returned to work in the family business. They opened new restaurants in San Francisco and Los Angeles. Even though family members sometimes disagreed with each other, they worked together to make the business successful. Daughter Elisabeth explains,"Our mother taught us that to succeed we must have unity, and to have unity we must have peace. Without the strength of the family, there is no business." Their expanding business became a large corporation in 1996, with three generations of Ans working together. Now the Ans' corporation makes more than $20 million each year. Although they began with a small restaurant, they had big dreams, and they worked together. Now they are a big success.-----

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3.Peter loved to shop used articles. Almost a month ago, he bought a popular word game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them. As he was purchasing it, the salesgirl said,“Uh, look, the game box haven’t even been opened yet. That might be worth some money.”

Peter examined the box, and, sure enough, it was completely covered in factory-sealed plastic. And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.“You should put that up for auction (拍卖) on the Internet, and see what happens.”the salesgirl said.

“Yes, you’re right. People like something rare.” Peter agreed,“I can’t imagine there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.”“Don’t forget to tell me if you sell it.” the salesgirl smiled.“No problem.” Peter said.

After he got home, Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his game. But he couldn’t find it. Then he typed in the name of the word game and hit Search. The search result was 543 websites containing information about the changes of the game. Over the years, the game had been produced using letters in different sizes and game boards in different colors. He also found some lists of game fans looking for various versions of the game. Peter emailed some of them, telling them what he had. Two weeks later, Peter went back to the shop.“Hello. Do you still remember the unopened word game?”

The salesgirl looked at him for a second, then recognized him and said,“Oh, hi!”

“I’ve got something for you,” Peter said.“I sold the game and made $1,000. Thank you for your suggestion.” He handed her three $100 bills.“Wow!” the salesgirl cried out.“Thank you, I never expected it.”--------

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